Punch Line

Punch Line by Richard A. Danzig is a gripping narrative set against the backdrop of comedy, societal issues surrounding gender identity, and the challenges of personal trauma. The story revolves around Verne Slater, a seasoned comedian whose late-night routine at a comedy club provokes strong reactions based on his observations of the ridiculous aspects of topical issues. Not surprisingly, George Carlin was his hero. The reactions lead to a brutal assault that leaves him critically injured and paralyzed from the waist down. The question is: can he get justice, and will he ever walk? The narrative interweaves Verne's conflict with the mainstream social perceptions of gender with the personal struggles of Chance Cormac, a once-suspended attorney who seeks redemption by helping Verne navigate the aftermath of his attack.

As the plot unfolds, we are introduced to a range of characters: Chance's dedicated law clerk, Susan, a martial artist with a keen understanding of contemporary social issues, and Red, a profoundly conflicted police officer with a traumatic past that intersects with the LGBTQ+ community. Red's violent retaliation against Verne shows the darker side of the social backlash against comedy that touches on sensitive topics, raising questions about freedom of speech and respect for diverse identities. The story takes several turns as Verne and Chance fight systemic injustices. Verne's struggle for justice against the comedy club's negligence and Chance's attempt to reconcile his past failures become central themes in this narrative that don’t lack humor — even as grim as it might be.

The characters are sophisticated and genuinely flawed. Apart from Slater and Cormac, readers are introduced to Rose Slater, Verne's supportive wife, who is equally well-developed. The book is set primarily in New York City, a locale notorious for its vibrant cultural scene yet marred by tensions. The contrast between small comedy clubs, such as the Joke Factory, and the more professional environments of law firms reflects the broader societal struggles encompassing themes of inequality, discrimination, and the fight for justice. Punch Line is a well-plotted, suspenseful, and thrilling tale of two flawed characters seeking justice and redemption. The pathos is persistent, the social commentaries endearing, and the humor intelligently crafted.